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Overly angsty. You lost a lot of the possible feelings with the I'm-a-teenager-with-a-suckish-life thing.
I'm going to agree with cheese. SO. MANY. PAUSES. It gets tedious, and after reading that many, I skip over them.
Blarghblarghblarghblarghblargh. -Deadly-'s thread is ~14 pages away from surpassing The Writer's Café…
Jesus…
Bwahaha. That's the spirit.
IMO, of course. I think there are a few good songs out there... Not many.
Mainstream stuff is utter crap from a bin.
Can't imagine that...
Blarghblarghblarghblargh... I don't like this song anymore.
GAAAH. Anyone else got a song stuck in their head?
Effort… Is… Deadly… Granted, it takes effort to type this crap that flows from my keyboard. :D
I don't. I'm in America too, you know.
Hotels! :D
The prologue, IMO, is the most important 'chapter,' because it sets the scene for everything. You can also use chapter one for this, but I prefer...
Grammar please.
It's because his opinion hasn't changed. I'll give you the same as Paradox: May the odds be ever in your favor Although I hate Americans.
By even reading it he's giving you a chance.
I personally don't. I'm such a hypocrite, I hate people who make assumptions.
Honestly... If people are viewing your profile, they're probably attacking you anyways. Nobody really views profiles to hire...
Capitalization, cheese. Destroyer. If you want people to be kind, be at least polite and not pompous/elitist. Telling someone to get out will...