Separate names with a comma.
Interesting plot, and beginning. However, your verbs and adjectives are boring. Try using different ones to make the word choice more interesting....
You switched to second person at the very end lol
Goodnight all
Oh noes
Re: GlooMi's Story List+ Signup/Feedback for her new story Okay: Character making is now closed
Conq. Are you posting a chapter every day on here? Also, Fang has a life P.S. Fang, to fix your editing problem, write your chapter on notes....
I'll probly crank out a chapter or two tomorrow...
Re: GlooMi's Story List+ Signup/Feedback for her new story That's all I wanted lol
Yay! Good job iZ
Your welcome If you ever think I'm being too obnoxious or harsh tell me
Helloooo?
How dare you hug criticism! Criticism is MINE to hug! (have noticed that when you post that you like criticism, you don't get it as much lol!)...
Here
Okayz
We know hidden CST
I actually don't care its your story, you decide
Hehehe
I granted him permission before you Irin... I WIN!
Excellent are me and Zaln going to be siblings?
Lol true...