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Bio: She has lived in a small town ever since she can remember. She has an older brother and her father is missing. Her mom abusive, so she was...
Sorry if my bio is skimpy i don't like it when people write bios in my stories, so when I see short bio, I keep it minimal
Name:Risana Dokido Age:19 Location: Small town Ability: Hypnotist Appearance: Dark blue eyes curly, auburn hair, pale with freckles always...
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I appreciate the feedback thank you. I have to look up some of the terms, but most of them I don't know. I'll ask Lady_m about a good writing app
Hmmm, interesting beginning and good overall. However, you used a little too much description so it distracted from the point of the story. Try...
Probly not but I read both your mysteries. Plus Zaln used to talk about you A LOT!
Thank you Lady_M
STORA IS BACK
Of course
Is my character going to be the main villain
Well I randomly bumped my guide, so if you wish to read it, that's the basic advice I'd give you anyway. If you still had questions, I'm sure...
Anyone comments? Anyone lol?
Hmmm, I think you better talk to Irin or iZaln first. No offense cheese but they could help him more.
Lol.
Floating, if you want a mentor, talk to Irin or iZaln. They are hands down the best writers here. Also, read my guide GlooMis guide to writing....
OMG! some girl just quoted you on Facebook! She even said "from a very good friend of mine's story, Salvation"
Lol, I love villains like that . The ones that manage to lure the heroes off the path and use them for her own goals without them even realizing...
Name: Ahriya Anusoto Age: Young for her kind Gender: Female Appearance: Long dark hair falling free down her back, bright violet eyes, and pale...
What should we put other than name age gender?