Separate names with a comma.
^Pardon my minimal reading.
What in the **** is a charry?
^ That sounds about right
^Oh, Rasputin. He was that one guy who convinced everyone he was a wizard or something, and controlled a movement with his "magic".
The thing is, you're doing that perfectly, but you don't reveal enough to get the ball rolling. So you're kinda restricting the reader....
^Could you get a mod to delete the non-OP posts on te two stories? My OCD keeps me from posting more with D_bo and others' posts on it :(
There once was a village in KaW; it wasn't a kingdom, but it was a fairly large, and very comfortable village. The people called it the Forums....
^You might want to tone down with the religious preaching. D_bo is a total asswipe, nonetheless.
^To the mods for aid, away!!!!
Oh yeah, by the way. NO POSTING ON THE ACTUAL STORIES. POST YOUR FEEDBACK HERE.
^It's a remake OF the remake of the original Revolution. New storyline.
-The Legend Of KaW- --Part 2-- ---Rebellion--- Just a foot of dirt and a thin layer of pavement sat between the two escapees and the stampede...
Review both versions of The Legend Of KaW here! 'Nuff Said. -FORMAT- 1) Cheese's Version 2) FeatherHunter's Version 3) Comparing summary
^I just used my idea :I I don't rely on inspiration. Usually. Ok, most of the time.
-The Legend Of KaW- --Part 1-- ---The Arrival--- "Noobies come this way!" "Returning players this way!" The Gateway, as usual, rippled with...
^My thoughts exactly
^Hm... Why not? We'll call it... The Legend Of KaW
^Yes, it's the one we discussed, just slightly changed. Sorry, I couldn't resist.
^Well who made the other thread with the exact same name?
I'VE DECIDED! CHAPTER ONE OF REVOLUTION (3) WILL BE WRITTEN IN TWO HOURS! I DON'T CARE IF ANYONE DOESN'T READ IT, I AM WRITING IT! Whoops, caps :3