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Now I'm scared what am i going to be doing
You probably need more female characters... Count me in
Lady_M lol!!!! That's hilarious . I promise I'm not a pedo
Why were you banned?
I didn't make a thread about it
It's my time. After Christmas I'll be gone
Description is definitely needed. We need to see the setting. We need to see what the characters look like. However weave it into the story. Dont...
Lol GI
Well cheese. Interesting story. Too bad I won't be around to see it finished
Jesus won't that girl ever stop
Yay
You need organization desperately. It's too messy. Your grammar and spelling are poor. NEVER start a story, or have in a story "I guess I should...
A lurker is lurking
For the fire villain I mean
Pyrus Heltovac? (male) Velina Ayopyr? (female)
Yay an excuse to bump a thread over Anmers alt!
We will prevail!
GlooMi sighs. "No I meant lady. To be frank youre the one who needs the physical essence."
GlooMi rolled her eyes. "Giving her more physical essence isn't going to help her at all. What she needs is spiritual essence, the essence of the...