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Thank you stora! It just appeared in my mind and has been bothering me all day
Just a thought I stood on the rocky outcrop and tilted my face to the sky. The cool mist settled down on my eyelids and my lips parted slightly,...
If the character can't see describe the smell of the air, the rough feel of ropes against her wrist and the rush of air outside of the cave. It's...
I almost cried
Hmm interesting idea however it needs some work. 1) Organization/ spelling Do not type this directly to Forums. That is a bad idea with a...
Yeah stop bumping it please, let it die, I don't have the time to keep it updated.
Excellent voice. I could hear the character talking in my head. However: You need to show us not tell us. Don't reveal everything to the reader...
First however I'm going to go crush some souls >:D to feedback!
Well I must go! Talk to you later (possibly)
Irin: Thank you!
Two reasons 1) they have turned rotten 2) they take up too much of my life
Regran- These are my stories and my stories only. Sorry. Stora- Yes I have quit Forums. However I was considering continuing Free Will or Before...
Bump for new readers
No Longer Human By me The Dark Army And Before betrayal Both end on part one. Read the dark army first. Find my story thread, they're on...
During your first story. In feedback. Lol
I am GlooMi. Hear me roar. Ask any writer here, I am the unofficial story helper/criticiser lolz
Lol Kimber. I told you that once. And I told Arimay that, ad Cinderpelt and Amberfur, and german_idiot and lady_m BTW. Saphire. Write the chapter...
Hey Whitehawk. See the forum button? Click it. See the board index button? Click it. See the Fan Fiction button? I wonder what that's for :D
Hehehe Boo!
And probably die in the end