Separate names with a comma.
I won't ask. Ok, I will. Por qué razon?
If you have HBO on demand, it's on that.
Better translation: 'If you think you're perfect, you're wrong.'
Kung Fu Panda 2. That stuff was deep.
Congratulations, Pixar. For the second time I cried at your movie.
... Rewrite it?
If I only feed you positive bull rap you wouldn't have any flaws to improve upon.
Sorry, kid, still crap.
Using that logic, FH, anything can be offensive. Still, I'll stay out of it. Anyway, Konstrikal, you obviously have the skills of a third grader,...
Come on, if you want to make a troll story, at least make it a few sentences :I
Какой идиот...
Oh.
No, I'm with you, Candi.
You guys missed an ENTIRE SEASON!? I feel sad for you.
Candi is right. Before the garbage I've been seeing lately, from about a year and a half ago, there were many many BRILLIANT writers here. You...
Nope. Nada. Нет. Nein. It sucks.
Stop with the pauses or I'll... Stop commenting on this.
Again, too many pauses. Also, those capitalized words make the story lose value, because instead of a deep, sad feeling, it's just an angsty teenager.
It's nice and all grammar-wise, but to me, Romance stories are and always will be cheesy as hell. That being said, the only comment I can make is...
I haven't bumped my story, smartass, because of certain family events and because of finals around the corner, in addition to several other things...