Separate names with a comma.
Okay... Let's actually talk about this.... @OP- sweetie- you seem really nice. Is there anyone in your life that you can talk to about stuff...
Who are you hanging out with :0
I think it's important that each person fits with their build. You can war efficiently with any build, but not every person can war. Its all about...
Awww... That's cute :)
Re: In-Depth Hansel Guide With Photos This explains really well how to build a hansel. Lots of hansels like to carry more than one attack...
also check out forums--- questions/feedback--- equipment (stickied guide by wulf) /lock
check bob's link /lock sufficiently answered
@op- I silenced you. You bypassed the censor on his/her wall. Please do not make accusations of someone requesting outside funds for in-game...
exactly what bob said :) /lock
Egad. Rhythm and rhyme are NOT the same thing. THIS is why I don't give constructive criticism. I am going to use the proper term here: meter....
And you don't think songs are poems? This is why I made a big deal out of rhythm. Many of the oldest poems (that werent epics like Beowulf) in...
Absolutely amusing as always. I'm glad to see the addition of wrath and dbo in the story. Tho I am still awaiting my appearance as the beauteous...
Change to: "my spit flames: gone, extinguished and burned to ashes It keeps with the rhyme and leads you into that amazing next line.
"my previously split flames" -previously is 4 syllables and breaks the rhythm of the song. It's not an important word that needs emphasis. The...
Excellent poem. It has a great rhythm to it. You have great potential. My only suggestion: keep that rhythm flowing throughout or break in...
I'll edit in spaces when I fix my atrocious grammar mar. Lol.
I know I said I wouldn't post.... But which bible you reading? 10 million years of tribulation??? FAIL
don't be noob /lock
Paragraphs are for losers. I might add a space between my block paragraphs, but I WILL NOT INDENT!!!
Chapter 2 :) Worse than the first :)