Separate names with a comma.
Name: Consuela Age: her fake ID says 17, but let's be honest, she's at least 35. District: Consuela is originally from Mexico and hopped over...
No **** spankbank. It raises 5% each time someone is hired and the plunder bonus to owner is juxtapositional.
Well written. :). I approve.
If a 12 year old wrote this and posted it in fan fiction of kaw forums, I will quit writing right now. I do not for half a second believe that...
Nope. I googled. It's available on third party sites that sell books. On the plus side, while I was looking, I found the last two books in a...
Also- let's say .... I make 20 mil per attack and use 10 mil in pots. I make a profit of 10 mil per attack. The guy beside me with 6 Coe doesn't...
Haunting* Did you engage in spy actions? Did you use items? What troops were pinned? Did you fail any actions?
1.) you didn't make a feedback thread 2.) explain to me: how did this book get published if chapter one isn't finished?
Yeah cheese. Defense towers don't do anything to change the way a pure spy runs. They work the same way the lvl 2 castle does.
Mom gave me a satisfied smile before leaving my alone in my room. I sigh, laying back on my bed. I pull the map I have behind my pillow out. It...
You go from past tense to present tense Example: Candace had a dog. Candace pets her dog. Had= past tense pets= present tense
:lol: I thought twilight was the LOTR of the 2000"s :lol:
Davy- Post your story IN ONE THREAD. DO NOT MAKE MULTIPLE POSTS. If you continue to spam by making new threads, I will be forced to take action...
AMAZING Cheese. I should have been hotter. Aside from that, I was giggling like a school girl the whole time. Loved it :)
Lol willy. I lol'ed
I'm a poet And I didn't know it I'm just too ******* dumb to show it Look I'm a poet too :lol:
Otherwise, it's fairly written. You need to really really find a way to elicit the emotion of your narrator. The reader needs to really know how...
Um, they made a movie about a zombie apocalypse where the last holdout was in a mall. The first of the George Romero living dead trilogy. Check it...
accepted into the FBI, as an Investigator --- no comma is needed here subconsciously convinced that she wanted to be in the FBI.--- she was just...
And THAT, ladies and gentleman, is how you merge threads :)