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-The Legend of KaW- --Part 14-- ---Absolution, Part II--- A devastating battle raged on behind the party, merely holding the Silent from swarming...
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So today I remembered we have a poetry night.
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I'm gonna throw in one last bit of criticism. Shogun means General Lord (something like that), basically the Emperor, controlling the entire...
Oh yeah, this "good writer"'s story isn't buried any longer. Thanks for noticing.
I just got my eyes examined, after the regular 2-year wait. Turns out my vision hasn't changed at all. Quite odd.
And one last thing. If ANYONE knows sarcasm here, it'd be me.
Oh, and there's really no need to use caps and excessive exclamation points. I like arguing calmly.
Alright, I'll admit I didn't read the story fully, I only skimmed. As for the whole Japanese surname thing, that's just a peeve I have. It would...
Oh, and we take things relatively seriously here as opposed to PiMD. That cheeky optimism thing you're doing isn't scoring any points with us.
It's... Eh. You call it the last samurai, and yet it doesn't feel like the last samurai. There's no overhanging sense of finality throughout,...
I'm gonna say it again: I write, I do not read. Not usually. I have 0 opinion on the subject, and I will probably ignore it. Now, I'm off to...