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@Zaln Lol ill probably have something today. I was thinking about it all night. @Blitz oh...er...well...I don't think it would've worked since...
Ok chapter
Loved this chapter
Very nice but you might want to work on a few things. Punctuation one of them.
U put this thread in the wrong place. Go google it.
Unknowingly*
lol I'm sorry Zaln! I really didn't mean to...I didn't know I'd hit writers block @Blitz you want an explanation? Ok, here it is: Reincarnation...
To be truthful either your character could've become a wombat or thyme.(Thyme is a plant.) And Karl turned into a wombat...
@Irin Thx! @Blitz Do you have something against wombats? I think they're kinda cute.
i hit writers block..i can't think.... :( Looks like you'll have to wait another day zaln :?
It'll*
Lol I'll probably be up by late afternoon
Hehe thx :) Court of the Green Lawn is my favorite
@Phoenix since when was I ur slave? Lol @Zaln tomorrow
Opps disregard above post! Read it wrong...srry.. But they r good ideas
Hey Anachir! Thanks for taking the time to visit FF! Read my story will u?(unless u have already lol) Here are a few ideas: Name: Twilight...
Noticed a few spelling mistakes, I'll be fixing it later. I might go through the whole story and fix it up....but then again it'll take a long time
BB colour code fixed
It's not bad but there are some things u need to work on. Grammar is one, and description is another. By description I mean the setting or what...