Separate names with a comma.
Probably because he has nothing better to do
Thx Zaln! :D
Well I didn't read anything since I know nothing about drawing but you draw better than me for sure!(if those were ur drawings.) Nice to have some...
Hm noticed a punctuation issue...I'll fix it later
Ummm....I think there's I testing threads in OT somewhere...
Very Uh bloody and um nice preview...lol
Feather it doesn't matter as long as all the threads are related to FF. We should be worried about the OT threads in FF.
Great chapter.
New chapter is up
Chapter 17: The Solution to a Tricky Situation "A what?" Keir asked loudly from behind Zaln. "A wombat." Drake repeated. "What is a wombat?!"...
for once
lol
now that u mention it....
@cello yeah i know i had problems with the word g.l.a.s.s. back there. It's really big issue because a lot of things are made of g.l.a.s.s. @zaln...
i'm just forcing this chapter out...i don't like it much :?
Very nice
I'm thinking
Basically the idea is to mix description with action.
Much better than before. But...the mirror thing!!! It's very boring when a character just looks at themselves in the mirror and describes...
More!!