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    A Raven Among the Doves: Feedback

    From the last two chapters, the bus I guessed got attacked, that's what it seemed like, now it's actually a test or something?
    Post by: Storallelite, Jul 23, 2011 in forum: Fan Fiction
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    A Raven Among the Doves: Feedback

    Nice chapter but I got a bit confused.
    Post by: Storallelite, Jul 23, 2011 in forum: Fan Fiction
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    A Changing Personality FEEDBACK

    Hm just read the last few chapters, not bad...lots of love triangle stuff though.
    Post by: Storallelite, Jul 23, 2011 in forum: Fan Fiction
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    Taken Away - FEEDBACK

    Nice!
    Post by: Storallelite, Jul 23, 2011 in forum: Fan Fiction
  5. Storallelite
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    Madness Unleashed - FEEDBACK AND CHAT

    Nice chapter
    Post by: Storallelite, Jul 23, 2011 in forum: Fan Fiction
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    Feedback for stranded.

    I'm not really a fan of gore so any feedback I leave will be biased for this chapter...good though
    Post by: Storallelite, Jul 23, 2011 in forum: Fan Fiction
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    The Son of God - Feedback

    Just skimmed it, but it's well written from the small bits I've read. When I have more time I'll read the whole thing.
    Post by: Storallelite, Jul 23, 2011 in forum: Fan Fiction
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    Selen's Mansion Feedback

    More please!
    Post by: Storallelite, Jul 23, 2011 in forum: Fan Fiction
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    Whispering Clouds FEEDBACK

    Great chapter!
    Post by: Storallelite, Jul 23, 2011 in forum: Fan Fiction
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    IronSight Feedback

    Post by: Storallelite, Jul 23, 2011 in forum: Fan Fiction
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    a story in process: revised

    Nice, such a sweet scene. Just be careful not to over describe.(You didn't do it but I think you could be in danger of over describing perhaps.)...
    Post by: Storallelite, Jul 23, 2011 in forum: Fan Fiction
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    Favorite Epic Battles!

    Uh and u put this in fan fiction because...?
    Post by: Storallelite, Jul 23, 2011 in forum: Fan Fiction
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    spragga will rise.

    Eh...then remind me to never come to Florida
    Post by: Storallelite, Jul 23, 2011 in forum: Fan Fiction
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    spragga will rise.

    I think
    Post by: Storallelite, Jul 23, 2011 in forum: Fan Fiction
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    spragga will rise.

    Approximately.
    Post by: Storallelite, Jul 23, 2011 in forum: Fan Fiction
  16. Storallelite
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    spragga will rise.

    29 degrees Celsius or 84 degrees fahrenheit.
    Post by: Storallelite, Jul 23, 2011 in forum: Fan Fiction
  17. Storallelite
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    spragga will rise.

    Exact opposite: heatwave
    Post by: Storallelite, Jul 23, 2011 in forum: Fan Fiction
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    The Writer's Café

    I'd like to know why too...
    Post by: Storallelite, Jul 23, 2011 in forum: Fan Fiction
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    spragga will rise.

    Canada that is
    Post by: Storallelite, Jul 23, 2011 in forum: Fan Fiction
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    spragga will rise.

    No lol. I'm at home...
    Post by: Storallelite, Jul 23, 2011 in forum: Fan Fiction
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