Separate names with a comma.
Why don't u go ask a mod?
Oh ok
:p
When I first posted the chapters it got censored. I guess they changed it now
Yikes...wombat fever lol
I'll see if I can tomorrow...
Ok
Awww I guess that FTLOC is on hold too. If u want I can write another chapter of FTLOC so you can have more time.
Idk. Anyway new chapter! Chapter 19 is now finished. Things are going to get really interesting now
Chapter 19: Boring Planning and The Machine Unveiled Part 2 Jerad's Viewpoint I crushed the status report with my right hand. "Internal Errors?...
Wait a second...you have to put a space?!?! THAT'S WHY MY WALL ART ALWAYS COMES OUT FUNNY!
Lol you thought it was over? If I left it like this it would seem incomplete.
Ooh great chapter!!
I feel the story is really rushed, and you need better grammar. You need to describe the setting more too, all you're focused on is the plot ATM....
And the mission I have in this story* Sorry. And thx, I'm glad you liked reading it. I'm coming to the end.
I'd prefer if you didn't, if you want to do an underwater story, or one with powers in it I don't mind as long as you don't copy my characters, my...
Oh...uh...um...er...I don't exactly have a wombat on hand right now(lol) Sorry pimella
Great chapter
Great beginning, everyone seems to be portrayed well.