Separate names with a comma.
You have a good plot so far, you just need a good editor.
so far, but the grammar and spelling errors make it a little confusing.
Oh ok and Utho I'll see if I can give him a minor roll.
Destan and you're a fast reader.
**UPDATE** ALL of chapter 4 is now posted! Enjoy!
Chapter 4 Part 5 “I have to go see her,” Hector decided, even though his legs were worthless. “I’ll crawl if I have to.” Mr. Trayton gently...
Chapter 4 Part 4 “Mr. Trayton, you’re not honestly going to use Ray to heal him?” Sonya asked, disgusted with the idea. “He couldn’t even heal a...
Chapter 4 Part 3 First the whirlpool now this. Hector thought as he felt his torso being hugged tightly by the wave and the pulling becoming...
Chapter 4 Part 2 Already, Hector began to become unconscious, swallowing more and more water. A rumbling noise erupted from the pit of the pool,...
lol its ok WW.
Yup in chapter 4. If not in the very beginning of chapter 5.
Thanks Bjorn.
Welcome back! And if you don't know yet, Chapter 4 Part 1 is now posted for Rise of the Minor Gods. Enjoy!
Do I have to do an apperance?
I don't know much so change anything you want. Name: PVT. Jeremy Sanders Age: 23 Branch: U.S. Army Weapon Specialty: Smaller guns, strategies,...
**UPDATE** Chapter 4 Part 1 is now posted!
Chapter 4 Part 1: Like a Fish Out of Water Falling over a cliff to your watery gave isn’t exactly a fun thing to do. It especially wasn’t fun for...
K thx
Still sorry about the water helm thing.
May I suggest to do a seperate sign up thread or maybe do a feedback thread.