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Too short? Try writing it in notes then editing before posting.
Lmao
Eh I suppose you can pull it off. Give it a shot, you'll never know until you try :)
A bartender?!?! Oh gosh now I have to sign up!! Name: Elaine Tay Age: 21 (or 23 if that's not old enough) Appearance: Bright green eyes, tan...
Maybe more description of the scenery?
@Secret I suppose it's OK but I can't really say since there was very little. I have to admit I'm a bit skeptical though. Maybe try providing more...
Sounds interesting winters!
Hehe yesterday I was playing pocket legends and two other people who were playing the same dungeon as me. I later found out that one was in Asia...
Visitors? Are you including Elythiae?
Ooh black butler.... I watched the first episode of this and it scared me quite a bit, Ciel is pretty creepy. This is pretty good though I'm not...
Lol I think I'll leave it to you, I'm not good at creating deceptive looking characters.
Deceptive and shrewd huh... Man...I can't wait for you to write this!(I've never had myself portrayed like that so I'm looking forward to it)
@Feather me in use...what? You mean in ur story? But feather I'm pretty sure u can come up with a character. If u want me to though I'll pm u...
@Zach er ok...don't know how to make one of those
This place is getting scary... *digs faster* Cheese why do you have the coolest trench? @Zach What's a montauge?
Where's my shovel? I want to dig my own trench... *Starts digging with a stick*
Eye roll isn't an emoji
@Candi I don't really think its a good idea to ask people if they're staying, mostly because it doesn't make much sense. It's the forums not a...
Maybe you shouldn't do too many flashbacks?
The events for your rewrite sound good, just make sure you give enough detail plot wise(you do well with description, maybe too much at times) .