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The newcomer flashes a grin and continues to sharpen her sword.
The newcomer remains silent and unsheathes her sword. She begins to sharpen it carefully.
The newcomer nods her head in thanks and sheathed the sword.
Shrugging indifferently she puts her hands in her pockets and doesn't react.
The newcomer narrows her eyes suspiciously.
The newcomer lowers her sword slightly, a frown still imprinted on her face.
The newcomer frowns and stands in a defensive position, sword raised.
The newcomer smiles mischievously and unsheathes her sword gracefully.
The newcomer tilts her head, interested with the armor.
A newcomer watches from a distance, a large sword strapped to her back. She crosses her arms and watches with curiosity.
Yup but I went on the note app to do some editing before hand.
I typed it up on my computer and emailed it to myself
-Out- Do you think I should post a story here? I'm hesitant to do so because I've made at least 4-5 other stories, all of which were not popular....
As long as it's not already taken of course.
-Out- Oh okay. How bout Destinys_Choice
Raises hand and asks, "What does 'out' and 'in' mean?"
I wave. "Hola lily welcome to the Writers Café!"
@lady Absolutely. Almost better, funnier too. The third one is just downright sad and leaves you on a MAJOR cliffhanger.
You're welcome lady.
I like it so far. But the word faerie looks weird on the iPod. Anyways... It's good so far, but I have trouble keeping track of the characters.