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Uh oh... *starts little fire in the corner of the cafe* That should do the trick
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Oh thats what you meant. Mystery is mystery but it's different depending on the way you present it. So I doubt it'll get compared. And what do...
Erm I didn't understand that...but whatever lol
Lol yup!
@Candi Lol I'm trying to give my main character more personality, last time I think I made the MC a bit too kind and stuff. @Pie Thx! Actually...
@Paradox it's stereotypical? I didn't know...I just went to a website that listed British names Lol I don't think any of the characters are...
@Candi yeah, i need to start proof reading more lol
Lol
Chapter 1 : Tired of murder The taxi drove into the semi circular drive that led to the entrance of the Thorton Place Hotel. A towering building...
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Well it's been more than half a year! Sorry for the long wait. So here is my newest story: Greeds Thorned Vines, a detective mystery story!...
Ok got first chapter done...I'll put it up now :)
Ok so I finished the prologue of Greed's thorned vines. Do you want me to post it now or wait until I finish the first chapter?
Errr...I agree with feather on this one. And Marodo, I don't think has given him help other than like get out of FF. which isn't really help...
I'm glad you like it :D
Sorry paradox I finished the outline for the first three chapters yesterday so when I have some time I'll write and post them all.
Thanks!
Exactly! Now you get it