Separate names with a comma.
-Out- who's Luke?
Redelle snickers.
Sighing, Redelle strides over to pink and stands over her. She mumbles a few words absently and goes back to leaning against the wall.
Redelle looks from Reg to Pink and closes her eyes.
Redelle shakes her head.
Redelle yawns and begins to sharpen a dagger.
Redelle tilts her head at the dragon, curious.
Redelle smiles slightly, and crosses her arms, making no attempt to move.
Redelle strides into the Café, her sword strapped proudly onto her back. She leans against a wall at the end of the Café.
Why do I never get comments for my stories?
I live for criticism so please post! *BONUS QUESTION* Chapter 2: Which Greek myth is Chapter 2 centered on?
Chapter 2: Smitten and Hittin Elaine demonstrated a few wrestling moves on Cyndia that she would try on Delta if they ever got to that...
If you can't take criticism... Good luck.
Shadow, I'm sorry to say this but you can't make a story that short and start a second book. It's only one post too and that's about as long as an...
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You got Elaine, Delta, and Cyndia right in the first post.
Each character is a different god.
The title is similar to my last Greek mythology story, but the plot of this story will be different. As you should know by now, DO NOT POST ON THE...
Chapter 1: Match Up “Come on Delta!” the coach yelled above the roaring of the audience. “We didn’t name you captain for nothing!” ...
-Out- Sorry for interrupting role play but I need title ideas for my Greek god story.