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Hello. What'd I miss?
Yes something to do! My corrections will be below the original in red. Isaac rushed though the abanonded city, searching for living people,...
Ooo... This sounds interesting. Can I be an editor? I won't be able to edit as frequently as I like, but I'll be on a few hours at a time.
The less you know the more of a page turner it is. That's what I think at least. Keep it suttle and mysterious! :mrgreen: (The green one is...
Confusing... But I liked it! I'm happy I have opposable thumbs too!
Chapter 7 up. *Bonus Question* What mythological figure is represented in Chapter 7? This one is a no brainer with Greek mythology fans. :mrgreen:
Chapter 7: A Horse Lover’s Dream The ten of them made it onto the high school campus just as the bell rang. They had all left their lunches on...
Awkward! As much as I wouldn't want that happening to me, I liked it. Pretty funny too, in a quirky sort of fashion. :D Smiles make the world go...
Chapter 6 up. I hope it's not too Percy Jackson. *worried face*
Chapter 6: A Meeting with Dike Lorie bailed when a drop of paint splattered onto her spotless white blouse. She walked quickly towards Rochelle...
I got an :lol: That's good. :)
I have to say, now that I read over Chapter 5, it's not my strongesy chapter... Oh well enjoy it anyways! :D
Chapter 5: The Domino Effect Patrick followed Hector and Delta to the cafeteria where the food was served. “But you said you’d buy me a lunch!”...
:| Extremely slow day.
Chapter 4, my New Year's Day present for you! ;) :D
Chapter 4: Slide Whistle Blues Sandra, Elaine, Cyndia, Hector, Lorie, and Delta sprinted over to where Patrick lay on the grass, face down....
Applause lady. You're writing continues to get better with every story. :D
HAPPY NEW YEAR!!! I'm so happy to be back (for awhile anyways). Computer deprivation has been driving me INSANE! It feels good to be back in forums.
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I think we scared her away...