Separate names with a comma.
SHEROCK RUINED IT
Thanks man. I'm trying as hard as I can. I'm more of a social studies guy, but best at science.
Any corrections tell me too so I can fix them! Thanks!
Yeah but no one rates a book outta two stars...it's not enough.
This will be feedback for my new story, Operation Storm. Please post all comments here. Post on that thread you will be farmed and not in story....
Lol
@NHL I choose outta 3 XD
Lol just wrote for fun :-) I haven't wrote a story In a year
Supposedly has a hacker check his wall
Ok edited version. "You ready for this?" Zaln screamed over the roar of the chopper. "Definitely." Replied Bastion. Suddenly, the chopper stood...
Sure Zaln you can be an editor. And I just inserted a random friends name, it wont really be rika. Anything to improve upon? tell me now because...
Sure.
K thx most of you will be used.
Dan page 12 what you think of my story?
Oh lol nvm my bad XX
No, it's up. Editor or writer?
Always appreciate. You want to be an editor?
No purposely, I'll be awithin points of views. Sure igloo, you have a week to start or have proof of starting a story.
First draft of my first chap. Note - these are random friend names so I'll insert the other shortly. I know there are mistakes- it's not finished....
Igloo you wanna be a writer? Or editor?