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feedback is unnecessary for such a badly written story. it sucked. bad.
the hell he's not. only depressed emo ppl write such poems. it's nasty
I'll be the first to say. no please, not another crappy poorly written story
ok
next chapter of vomit
he's not emo? you're crazy. his wording clearly indicates his emo tendencies.
you writing poems in five minutes is abundantly clear. if you spent large amounts of time writing this garbage, that'd be even more embarrassing.
you can find a new hobby other than trying to write crappy poems
probably because it was an overly simplistic poem written by a sad emo
maybe I've seen worse. but this one is definitely high up on the omg this sucks list
lame
don't worry. most of these failing amateurs are failing everytime they try and right. you wouldn't be alone.
lol this poem sucks
I gotta pee
no. just a realist
it's too bad heaven is a lie.
the message is: Jesus is a lie. remember that.
lol @ shadowdumpingninja you suck
common in the land of douche bags.
@Neo you're so funneh. I'm not a troll. sorry.