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clearly written by an amateur. it's bad. all the way around
it was meant to stink
pretty funny stuff moose
practice in the privacy of your own home or on a forum designed and intended to deal with aspiring writers.
@yip that's an awful lot of ranting for someone who "doesn't care". so please, if that's the case, I'd gladly love to see you shut the hell up....
Yeah because I'm a 3rd grader. and I've been playing kaw since 2009. so I've been active on kaw since I was what, 6 years old? I must be a...
@troll don't forget they like to purport themselves as reasonably talented "writers" as well. it's pretty amusing
you most certainly act like a professional know-it-all. you speak as if your view is the only view and your view is 100% correct.
oh joy. we can see more stinking pile of dog **** writing.
crappy and poorly written stories but yeah
using EB titles is one of the elements that made this story a fail. I mean, who writes about made up KAW fiction?
lol featherduster. the "professional critic" what a load
as I have said the last 6 times somebody brought up the "why don't you write a story then?!?" argument, I'll say it again. I've said before, I...
that'd be true if I was retarded. but since I'm not. your stories DO suck.
stupid fool
respectful and honorable players? according to whom? you? lol you are a nobody. a nobody who thinks they can actually write a story.
pardon me. allow me to elaborate. You have no writing skill. Your stories both are horribly written. You are a douche bag. Fin
one of the symptoms of mental handicap is reverse emotions. So of course you'd laugh. but not nearly as hard as those who read your stories.
you really need to find something other than kaw related fiction to write about. haven't you anything better to do? I guess it doesn't really...
you're retarded yip.