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Srry can't
Any1 else?
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U on Utho
I ment get the plot moving faster and explain things better to paint a picture in the readers mind
It's no too hard Night
I'm 13
Buil it fat and keep it interesting no1 wants to read the same thing over and over And with that BJ is out
Yes cass I know u love your chapter
I mean the main characters
Get the story going faster add suprises and allow characters to get hurt
I'm a good writer a school
I'm still young though so I didn't know what to expect
Than for all the support every1 I'm young so I was expecting ppl not to like the story
I'm a young writer so I was expecting my story to epic fail
It's a good story it just needs a few grammer tweeks
K just putting it out there
New chap of the Demon Chronicles is up
I'm a hard critic but it still a good story
Story is ok there r some grammer and spelling issues and the whole thing seems like 1 chap but it's still ok