Separate names with a comma.
Keep going or i eat u
That second "yeah" wasn't meant to be there -.-
Yeah. What's the holdup, I'm an extremely impatient self-centred person with no thought whatsoever for the writer and Yeah. More please?
PARAGRAPHS!!! ME NEED PARAGRAPHS!!!
And replace "do not know" With "don't know" It helps the poem flow better :D
Um it's confusing. Does it Have a structure? Not raining on your parade but either make it rhyme or don't make it rhyme don't try make some...
Wait, your starting a new book, but dont know what about? And you want us to give u ideas for one? :| Seems a bit messed up o.O
Only if more people feedback. U have no idea how disheartening it is to spend at least 45 mins creating that and two people post. :cry:
PLEASE CONTINUE! I know how annoying it is when NOBODY PUTS ANY FEEDBACK on your thread and your just like, **** you kaw. (hint. Hint. A...
Wait you see the stars in "Emeron c ocked his head to the left? Well it can't really classify as bypassing because that is not a bad word when...
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Please post feedback on the chapter. Ive re-read it and it's quite slow. I wanted to introduce Iris as a character a bit more. Emeron is in...
Chapter one. Iris glanced at the three tattered outfits she had laid out on the bed. She didn't have much, which was a good thing now, because...
Yes. It's a trilogy. The "books" are: 1. Emily 2. A life of lies 3. ( no title yet) A life of lies is already started. Its in ff take a look...
Thanks very much for the constructive criticism
Hey guys if u could please read the prologue if my story a life of lies I'd be so grateful thanks
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Ok new story alert. Please read for Jesus' sake. Feedback below, please post some. I promise a cookie for da first one A life of lies...
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