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Humph. Last time A and E with his family. The doctors had been right in calling her a medical miracle, the girl was conscious, but there was a...
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Whaaaaaat! Where it says she kept her real name for school and *** and stuff IT SHOULD SAY Though she kept her real name for school, and...
Long, endless corridors with the constant smell of bleach, large looming doctors just dying to inject you with some foreign liquid, tubes, endless...
A high-pitched scream rang in the air, and Celeste realised with a shock it was hers. Trembling she scrambled to her feet to inspect more closely...
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Chapter One - part two Celeste followed the stick figure into the kitchen where there was another painfully long silence. Once again, broken by...
And I would really appreciate it if anyone read Emily and gave feedback? Please?
Really good but I'm confused by the little part about some lad named Ojun. Am I not meant to know yet or have I missed something?
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thanks for the feedback @ superman: I am grateful for your criticism, and will review Celeste's personality, but however, be honest, if I had...
I'll just sit here waiting for someone who has the heart to do so. Even if they're like "this story is **** because blahhhhblahhh It would be...
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Ok so this is a bigger and better edition of the first story in a trilogy I am writing. Sorry for all the mistakes I am sure to make but please...
It kind of worked?
Hmm... I want to try something... ____________________________________ by etak a million years ago This is gonna fail, I know it.
Re: Kingdoms at War - 03/18/13 Update POLL Is it bad that I don't understand what the he'll your post is about and am just using your game for...