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I'm writing 2 books and starting on a third.
Sighs at Alekandre "She didn't have to choose me. She could've chose you." hisses in frustration and sits down in the snow
"I didn't Want to upset you guys." Mutters blankly. I look at my surroundings. "I might be back one day. Maybe not. It depends on Where life leads...
"Yes I'm leaving. This country isn't for me" Starts to walk back to the next province.
Looks at Smighter. "Leaving" That one words says it all. I think to myself and then continue over the border to The next country.
There aren't any sign ups for this book... :/ I'll make a feed back thread unless this is it
Stands at The border and looks back. "Stop looking back. It's bad luck" i mutter to myself. And closes my eyes, trying to forget this town and all...
Critique please?!
(btw the book is called: Warriors Power Of Four: Young Dreamer)
OOC Feather I think Damon wants u lol
Prologue "I'm a ThunderClan warrior!" Tigerkit yowled loud enough for StarClan to hear. "No, you're not, you're a ThunderClan KIT. Now hush, I...
Here it goes:
I open The door and walk out, giving a last look at the place, I walk out and start to see the past as I walk to the border, to the next country....
-nods slowly-
X98. It was a finishing statement -___-
OOC Okay... BIC I stand up when my head finally stops pounding and I start to try making my escape "Which is the front door..." I laugh at my...
OOC Feather. How? -_-'
And add more detail :) so it makes te story more interesting. ~ Tiggy
OOC How Feather?
OOC It was? Then re-regard it lol