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Chapter 2 A light breeze flowed through the forest as bee's. Hurried to polinate natures creations, this Summer tranquility was interrupted by...
Why no comments on my book :( is it that bad /:
Hey guys (: sorry if my story is terrible please post constructive criticism hrre
Long ago before the prehistoric ages, before the earth as we know it was made it was a different earth. This earth was ruled by humans, this earth...
Nice story ...
Keep writing -.-
CONTINUE!!!!!
Darn ... that was short -.-
Please write more (:
BUMP!!!!
Nice
I DO
Its really good (:
I LIKE THIS STORY!!!!!!!! YAYAYAYAYAY
Once upon a time there were three men in a room .... they never came out :oops:
And ...I relatively like the storyline GOOD JOB LYNN
Hey smighter the blighter .... I remember what your critacism was like ... I'm giving him advice ... not YOUR GRAMMER SUCKS YOU NEVER IMPROVED...
I lika. It (:
@_@ it was pretty good (jerk)
I'm sorry for the criticism.... but read over your work!!! Its very interesting but the spacing grammer and spelling are all terrible ... are you...