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Terr I feel lime nobody cares about books anymore ....
I like it ... Only problam is Bad punctuation Very short post Wall of text Keep improving (:
Why does nobody give me feedback
Next chapter up .... Fyi her family don't play roles in the story And I'm trying to show thatvshe only fights when provoked
Cahpter two. after she went about 200 yards I started following her. she went towards the city and then a few guys...
Me neither
Can I have a sprite please?
Meh.... I still don't realize what's going on .... they are getting attacked by angels .... ok they did something bad ... DEMONS? !!??? demons...
Sure
Ok thanks (:
Sorry for starting off slow. But I'm making chapter 2 much longer
Chapter One. "Are you ready sir,?" "yes I am" I replied calmly. although I wouldnt be calm if I knew what was...
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Hey guys feedback here please If you hate my writing don't even say anything
Please post on feedback thread and I am trying really (: hope you enjoy it
NAMELESS. Name Sierra. Age 18. last name. lairon. power. unknown....