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I mean stora
Yea good one story. Thought I was the only one who ever heard of it
Ok try this song by coldplay I used to rule the world The seas would rise when I gave the word But now in the morning I wake alone Sweep the...
Sorry never heard it I don't think. But has anyone noticed that alot of post are turning into arguments? Or am I just going crazy.
＼(^o^)／awesome story dude can't wait for the sequel.
-_- I will put more paragraphs next time then. See I'm practicing.
Let it die and let him write critique him at the end of his story !!
Yay. But I have bad grammar but thnks
Second Chapter Age 15 In the Kingdom of Eton all children are given a choice of career. I chose an apprenticeship for the royal army, the...
It makes me sad that I haven't got any positive feed back
Don't let this page die. Lots of good stories
Chapter 2 will be out in a day or two hopefully it's better^_^
Opps it posted to much sorry -_-
Ok Ill try that stuff but it's my first story so don't expect much
Hold of for on the criticism for a little while it's my first story
Ok hold on the criticism for a little while and give me a little chance it's my first story
I know, my iPod can only copy one paragraph I'll try writing the rest on the actual post instead.
Sorry I writing from a different section of my iPod and can only copy and paste on paragraph at a time.
First Chapter(revised) http://forum.kingdomsatwar.com/viewtopic.php?f=12&t=109765 "To me soldiers, to me!" I shouted as I slashed and jabbed...
No, sorry I meant a topic I have I ideas but I don't know which do use should I have a vote instead???