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Chapter 7: (Cdt Chan) I walked along the trenches trying to find my bunker which I shared with Lee, Chen and Lo. There weren't enough for...
That wasn't exactly the type of feedback I was looking for, but I've been looking to change it without resetting. Can't afford it because I don't...
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Chapter 6: (Sgt Lo) I walked along the wrecked Axis trench littered with bodies of those that didn't survive. We had moved our position...
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Chapter 5: (Cdt Lam) I suppose I've never described our physical appearances so here they are now, but I warn you I'm no good at describing...
Chapter 4: (Cdt Chen) I had gotten stabbed a while back, but it's been two months and I thought I was feeling better, but two days in the...
Chapter 3: (Cdt Lee) I wasn't quite sure what I was doing, but I remember seeing a young boy being dragged towards a wooden post that lay...
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Chapter 2: (Sgt Lo) Slowly, I open my eyes and the world comes into focus, I turn my head and find that I was in a casualty station, and...
Chapter 1: (Cdt Lam) I write this because it removes stress. Every day for the past 3 months it has been the same thing; us throwing bombs at...