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It's cool bro ham! Don't let that bro worry ya!
I'm 12!! And I like the Third one cuz it seems like a Ghost Story and I LOVE Ghost Stories!! <3
Not even CLOSE to funny Bellemorte
Oooh.. Alright! This is an old one anyways.. Saw it in mah app of stories and I was like hmm..
And dafuq does Tense Change mean?
Belle.. Okay, thanks Bruh... d_bo.. HEY BRO
BUMP
Like d_bo said, it kinda is a jumble of words. It's like the Lord of Writers got terribly sick and barfed that story up.
I have come to accept d_bo's bluntness.. He is telling the truth! So, just ignore him people.
Woot! Ric making a storay!
It's alright. And as for d_bo, I wouldn't worry. Like he stated, he doesn't know ANYTHING abt the writing world of stories, so therefore, he can't...
I have a therapist because when I was in the 4th grade, my friend commuted suicide.
~Ρερρεr*
Y'know D_Bo, I have come to appreciate your smug comments and useless arguments that you start with all the wrong people. I just hope you find a...
It has good detail, but it's just too short, y'know?
D_bo is just a parasite.. Ignore him
Lol oh D_bo! I "Love the way you lie!"
And d_bo, Ÿøú can't say ANYTHING. I seriously doubt you actually read the story.