Separate names with a comma.
Okay start..... Continue though
It's okay I guess :/ ....... U shouldn't do txt style like saying "u" instead of "you" and what the characters say doesn't sound like what real...
Don't care about any errors as there is very few...... Pls continue
Write.Now.Please.
It!!! One of the "better stories on ff" I look forward to every chapter
Good...
Are u really getting worked up over a stupid comment? No intention to be rude or anything
Np, and F0RCE said he would take negative comments which aren't really negative, they just help the author
Ooh, ur getting better with longer posts Anyway, spelling and grammar and ur set
Name:Blake Regret Gender:Male Age:15 (make him whatever) Weapon:Staff(Just a metal pole) Abilities:Fairly good at hand to hand combat, he is...
Psh, fail
I like it [size=150] MORE PLS [\size]
Test cool
Ok, thnx smighter
God, no need to be mean
It's been really quiet around FF........ Is anyone writing a story or something
Okay I guess, I'll be waiting for more though
Good so far, keep it up!
Um okay, here Name: Lucius Class: Assassin (Good) Weapons: Blades attached to strings so he could control/pull back the blades he throws...
Hey