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Yay another part I feel like I can improve my story a bit, any ideas? :/ -TF Chapter 3 September 16th, 2011 12:49 p.m. I had woken from the...
More coming today
Note: Srry, changed her name to Lynn lol
Feed back would be appreciated -TF Chapter 2 September 15th, 2011 8:17 p.m. The last few days have passed in a blur. School was as...
September 13th, 2011 7:34 a.m. I walked into my pre-calculus class cautiously, my shoulders hunched and my head low. The class was only half...
Prologue September 12th, 2011 Exactly one year has passed since I died. Eleven months and three weeks since I rose from the grave and was...
Each chapter a kinda short, but I like it
Um, u mind giving us what ur looking for? What time period and that stuff.
B-b-b-but
Interesting hmmm...... *rubs chin with imaginary beard*
I'm writing a new story because my other one got deleted Does this sound like a good prologue? Born of Fire Prologue: Weak. Even the word...
Update pls
I think it's ok u just need to have more detail, right punctuation, and longer chapters
Flipping cliffhanger!!!!!!!! I still it though Job
Wow, Tessa's story sounds like Rosalie'a in twilight lol I still luv ur story though
Cliffhanger NOOOOOO!!!!!! Pls update more often, I liv ur story
^maybe
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I Monster Hunter! Name: Nocturne Race: Elf Weapon: Gunlance/ Hammer Appearance: White hair, Pale skin, Skinny but has muscle, Yellow-ish eyes,...
It? No..... It!!!