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Ok that fine I I'm just going to add a weakness if its of with you: she sees memories of her parents while in combat it leaves her very vulnerable
I'm working per writing it now but I've been really busy recently so I haven't had much time. And I'm going personally make an older guy/leader...
Not bad at all I like the plot so far
Ok then you don't need to make that post
Ok thanks can I add a knife as a weapon along with the stopwatch?
Ok thanks both of you:)
Ok I'll try my best to use it's just I've gotten a lot oh and one more thing can you add a weakness?
Yes
Wow you are very fast writer I love it!
Oh one more thing I really like: you write quickly. Probably the fastest in FF which doesn't allow me to lose interest so again great story!
Great story! You do a fantastic job creating suspense and you put some very interesting turns in which I like. But the negatives: you don't have...
You should just write for yourself etak...
I Don't know I've been kinda busy lately but I'll get back to writing tommorrow
Sure
Nice you should continue
Good thank :)
I just started a book it's about a zombie apocalypse
But thank you very much:)
Please for the bios don't include what they did when the apocalypse started just their life before it
Im Almost done the prologue