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30min at least! You?
Ok WW!! I'm free!! Let's go!! XD topic?
Oh!! Perfect timing!! Room for one more? XDXD
Um klassik? Amazing!! You get my vote!! I loved the ending!!! And mars!!
Really good kimber!!! Unique idea!!! Intersting that neither of you chose to rhyme it!!
Good!! I like how you repeated desire over and over..it helped to cement the idea! Just wondering though..,why did you split them into 3 liners?
Mistype! Haha my wrist hit the button! ( it's got a mind of it's own!)
ZOMFG!! Did kimber just post on this thread?!! Dont you know who she is?! She's a legend!!!! XDXD
Kimber your really good!! your not gonna get creamed!! XDXD
Oh do like" Whispers" or something!! ...actually no...that would be hard..
I think rap is poetry...rap is a form of music and everyone says that music is poetry in song so hey wouldn't rap count?
Where'd kimber go? You two should compete!! Oh!! Are we allowed to make topic suggestions?
Experienced?!!!! NO!!! I'm gonna get ass whooped!!!
Klassik I agree! haha that's what happens when you only have a short time to write it!! Now someone else compete!!! I wanna hear more poems!! XDXD
Thanks but I liked your poem better!! I like the message in it!! Mine was just simple rhyming!!
The reason I didnt use" journey ends" was because it didn't go with the rythm and for foes and below I was rhyming the vowels not the end!! But...
Damn I messed up the 2nd verse!!
I apologize for the suckiness of my poem!!! I found this topic difficult!!! Critisize please!!! XD
The edge beckons as I draw near My heart beats fast, consumed by fear My feet inch forward nearing the lip One wrong move and forward I'd tip...
Oh!! And most of my poems will probably be rhyming ones!! They're my favourite!! XDXD ( plus I suck at free verse!!)