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(sorry I forgot to put a ! and I exclaimed)
"ATTACK!!!!!!!!!!!"the boss screamed.*I grab his neck then he pushes.me too the ground*"ooooooofgh!"I exclaimed.*he grabbed me with his jaw and...
"I can take him."I said as I walked to it.
"lets give it too the boss."he said. "LINE UP YOU LOUSY MAGGOTS!!!!!!!!"the boss barked "NOW ITS TIME FOR THE MAN WHOS MANLY TO FIGHT KILLER...
You could of waited I was only on page 1 if it was horrible at page 2 I would understand why
I was until he came and started going blah blah and waited but if it wasn't good details I would of understood yes I get about the sentences
"just the map".I said "its jumbled up with location codes with out the dots too seprate".
"hmmm something wrong here."I said "what is it?"a man asked
(sorry I meant skiny blade)
prologue:"just need super laser skin blue and 20 lock picks and a rope".I said "or use the door".my partner said
hey this like my fourth story but might not last sorry if they're are mistakes
I mean fun of
so making funvof me helping is helping
who cares All I said was god bless you
there I may be a crybaby at least I show you I have a heart
GOD BLESS YOUR FAMILY AND OFFSPRING FOR A THOUSAND GENERATION GOD BLESS YOUR MOTHER THY FATHER GOD BLESS YOU'RE SISTER THY BROTHER GRAND DAD THY...
I MAY GET MAD BUT TO BE NICE GOD BLESS YOU
now you know why its horrible now
I just can't make a great stories but can't quit happy
Im getting sick and tired of people judging me because how I walk slow or how I dress