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I feel your pain of needing a teacher.
Just trying to help.
You should put spaces in yours, makes it a bit hard to read. But me no teacher so me no grade.
Ill work on it for next time. Now if a teacher would grade it...
I KNOW RIGHT! Same thing happened to me.
I didn't even read anyone elses, as i already said i had broken interwebs. But i felt like it would be easier, did you like it webs?
me 2
My interwebs has been broken, so i just got back now.
My interwebs has been broken, so I have to do this now, sorry. Castle Redmount was impregnable. It was high up on a steep hill surrounded by...
I cant wait to see my improvement 2.
Ok im sorry [/terrorizenewb]
Thanks Irin ill work on that for tom. :) Not 2 harsh, i asked for opinion, and i got it.
I would like to know what genre of books you like to read.
You really got to rank... i mean if its a school we get individual grades and stuffs.
Confused = me
What you talking bout willis?
Why noes me getz A? What you talking bout willis?
On my way to the U.S. I went over what just happened in the past half hour. 11:00 P.M. At the National Art Museum London, England I just...
Ouch thats a mean assumption. Yes, I liked it, but there isnt really enough to see where this would go... so ill be the first one to say this...
You better have.