Separate names with a comma.
I didn't say it was bad criticism PielordTy
Beware of, Featherhunter, PielordTy, and Cheesemuffin. They do some criticism
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Re: PostQuestionsHere Why is Bellemorte so awesome
BACK TO VEGAS BABY
No offense TL;DR I have ADHD I get easily bored
Off my thread
Whoops, I forgot a comma
Feather make a character or get off my thread.
Amazing
Im going to make an even better one after my vacation
It's still better
Change that to They barely make it out of the open fire AND not they and then continue the sentence
Sentaral Greymane and his companions have been mysteriously transported to a strange dimension where everyone is a dwarf. Him and his companions...
Here's a better one
K I know what it is
Well I'm going to start
I just took a break from fan fiction and I've gotten way more mature
What is synopsis?
Well to start it off it's about an alternate dimension filled with dwarves with a gigantic kingdom. Then some travelers get transported to the...