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Hey I hope you didn't mind my critiquing your story on your idea thread.
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Great books. I've noticed you tend to jump between first and third person narrative in the same chapter though. It doesn't really take away from...
Name: DC Personality: kind of loud but not too obnoxious. Loves women. Charming. Not trusting. Description: 5'10. Short brown hair. Blue eyes....
I felt myself being dragged across the stadium floor by a pair of hands holding tightly onto my ankles. I could hear the curses and laughter of...
New part!
Haha you'll find out either tonight or tomorrow night.
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Our minds were made. All of us were clear on what was going to happen today. The walk up from our cell to the stadium seemed to go by incredibly...
Alot of spelling/grammar errors. You tend to describe meaningless details more than your characters. Focus less on the meaningless stuff and more...
I can honestly say I don't like any of your stories. Lol. I'm not trying to be mean or anything but you kind of steal the plots from other movies...
Dav stop being a ***** and reset like me. Lol
Hahaha
People please stop bumping this. Lol
Re: The Labyrinth Sign Up/Feedback Hurry gloom! Lol. I need my fix!
Jesus Christ Arimay stop with the random **** on ff.
Yea that's definitely not the ending. Lol
Wooo!! 100 posts!
Hope ya enjoyed it Gloomi. Lol
Tip #3: bump your feedback thread with your story thread.