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So what do you think? Shall I write more?
"what a pleasant surprise finding you here David, I was..." the figure started to say but was interupted by a bout of laughter from the crowd. Now...
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No suggestions people? :( Come on
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and polished to perfection, not a blemish on the surface. David takes his time walking over to Hirok. "Well Hirok, seems like you've gotten...
and swipes the guards leg away from underneath him. Ripples of laughter pass through David's body, obviously audable as many of the onlookers...
and without noise. Her eyes locked on a shadow at the far corner of the room. She walked quietly there. "heel, side, ball" she remembered. She...
A sweet and soft melody started to play in her head, it was one she remembered him playing. She sighed, letting the music bring back the memories....
and threw the cover off of her in a flourish. She was standing at her full hight... Which wasn't tall to be completely honest and even she knew...
~A Lost Sword W Prologue The Moon was starting to set over the horizon; bringing the darkest hour on this night. Against the pale night sky, the...
Or you could just be an Osf. I'm knight, and I approve this message.
Okay, need more feedback to write more
Sorry I haven't written in awhile
haha
I ptobs should try & write mor of A Lost Blade, buts it's utter crap.
No one has read it lol :P
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