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Be respectful guys, what if one of your stories was being criticized in this manner. You wouldn't care for it either, plus it doesn't help him get...
Ah!!!
What's wrong tonight conq?
Bump for a down friend
The app is called simple mind
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Okay, when you read with my input, doesn't it seem to flow a bit more easier?
Sorry for being out of sync( not in order) lol. For the begining. Say the year first (coma), then I am (characters name), and I live (place...
And replace random guys with strange men
Take out "that dreadful day happened"
May I make a few suggestions if you allow?
Sweet
Lol. When it happens. I am Alex Emerick
Lol yeah
Since you like comedy, sci-fi, and action... Maybe a revenge based story setting in the future or a different planet. Where your main character...
My style, which I hope you could see is sci-fi. War. Basically. And I am nor sure how long you have been playing, but I've tried many ways to...
Not sure. My writing style differitiates from yours. So I am not sure. What is your style, or approach to writing? Sci-fi, romance, sporty, comedy?
Very good
Tell me what you think
PROLOGUE TO "AWAKE" Centuries ago... When all seemed lost, and the world was engulfed in turmoil. Every nation fought for it's right to stay...