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Interesting to write in "you"-form. I've only read one other story/book that used it (can't remember the name). That's not a bad thing, though....
This is AWESOOOME A sweet-based world and dog police? Heck yeah! Keep up the good work
I like the story so far, it's very interesting
Well... Cats could just kill the owls, but the owls could fly and lift up the cats. Hmm... I believe this is an ancient question that many have...
I LOVED the chapter, especially the Portal 2 references It's a really interesting story, I hope that you keep writing more
Thanks to you all
It's really good. The gore was there, but you didn't make it extremely graphic which is good. I don't really have any complaints so far
Thanks a lot
Really awesome story/poem Please make a full story of it, I'll read every bit of it
And that most (or all, not really sure) of your poems are reality based... Wow, it takes strength to write about it. Amazing. Simply amazing
I love all of your poems and this is no exception. Your work is amazing. Keep on going!
New chapter up!
Chapter 3. When I woke up, I was in a chair. My arms, legs and torso were tied to the chair. I knew it wouldn't help to try to get out of the...
What's this? Chapter 3 already? Yep I know this is kinda an uneventful chapter, but it's needed to proceed to the next part of the story I...
You're welcome I try to listen to feedback as good as I can
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Yaaay Here I go... Name: Fainaura (sometimes just called Aura) Age: VERY old, but looks like 20 Gender: Female Race: The attacking...