Separate names with a comma.
I actually just did
Lol
Story I got bored and wrote. Enjoy! Aka, AK. Dean Caesar, a strong man, about 5’7 staggered into the room. His brown hair fell over...
I kind of think all of the sentences are abrupt. Lots of detail doesn't help if there's no flow.
Just some. Like the teeth and claws
Yeah.
Appearance:Tan skin, One eye blue, one eye red, claws appear and disappear at will, long legs, short arms, good posture, small nose, and large...
Very good!
Almost forgot, sorry. Outcast, and usually a loner. Hangs back from crowds, really shy.
Name:Monodread(bad), Chris (Good) Age: 13 Height: 5'1 Personality:Friendly, nice, constructive, but two personalities. Other personality: Dark,...
Fang comes over to comfort cheese, but falls over, due to tripping over a body without a head.
"I am back!" Fang says, spreading his arms wide with a smile. To his dismay, nobody notices.
No it's a section to eat Swiss cheese.
HALLO IRIN!!!!
Naga shadow ur guy sucks. U suck at making characters.
Oh. Well then i thunk i might not do it.
It is good.
I just need one character. That's it. Never mind no more new good character. One more evil.
It's ok, but learn to spell prologue.
Ok.