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Lol thxs a ton I will try 2 make more fight scences
This is awesome good 4 beginners and even pros lol 2 thumbs up
So how do u guys like my story so far
Cool so what do you think I should improve on and out of 10 what would u give my story?
so did u like the story in general?
It's ok
Plz don't comment here post on my fan fiction feedback page
Plz only comment here if you have read my Naruto Fan Fiction all comments will b appreciated no foul language or just flat out rude for no reason...
Naruto Fan Fiction *This is a Flashback from the ANIME version of Naruto (like when they were with Kakashi-sensei I will gradually ease into...
"Um.." Amehime said blushing "well You better get some rest" Yuroichi said as she pushed everyone out and turned off the lights in Amehimes room...
Have I mentioned i love ur story
No offense but this is a typical love story ur technically doing a demon version of Romeo and Juliet
There should be more kaw Admins one because on wc there is always profanity
AWESOME STORY SIS!
Any other comments?
right back @ u
Write more!
Bump!
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Thxs shinigamichigo I will try 2 finish it *ignores Zero_Mech*