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Thanks, but please post on feedback thread
The other two suck
^ Only the first Matrix
Thanks :)
Lil, I use a nifty app called [removed due to 3rd party advertising] that allows me to be organized and keep all my ideas n **** in one spot.
Lil Op is a friend of mine, I was telling him what he needs to improve on.
Apology accepted Cf granted
Good Job Lil_Tiger, Though most of KI has not been read by me, I can tell by the responses that I will be amazed. Good job on all of the hard...
hinting* Not hunting
-1 Short -1 Frequent Grammatical Errors -1 No Plot Line Hinting -1 Capitalization Errors -1 No Format -1 Punctuation Errors -1 Little Creativity...
^^ There is definite plot line hunting in the first chapter, you would not understand though until the story progresses.
No support
More people need to give me feedback on my new story:
GLORIA A LSA
Not realistic at all and your facts are skewed. ie: The police officer does not decide the punishment for crimes, the judge does.
Moar feedback
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No zeus I downloaded it then undownloaded it in the same hour
You have doomed us all
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