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Welcome to my new story Tram! Post feedback in specified feedback thread. Chapter One "Come on! Just do it!" Justin called out. I was on the...
Roses are red Violets are blue Planemaster get out Before I farm you
Lav, shut up, that is done and was a while ago. Keep this thread on topic.
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I'm 2011
This story has no character description, no setting description and no weapon description. The sentences are choppy and there are typos. This...
I have not read your previous stories, but I read this prologue and I assume they were decent enough. I have to applaud your sentence structure...
Like I previously stated, dry and weak threat
I find it funny how she is wasting her troops! I am a naked farm lol
Yeah lol
Yeah Deni! It does make you look scarier when you can kick a chihuahua over your backyard fence! Whoopee! You look so scary hitting someone that...
NOW I see why །ཧའ wants them gone They're nonsensical!
No, you just get ban