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Primo: General Gladus messages me back "That's fine, the soldiers sent to stop him are holograms. Thought I'd make his day more exciting. Do your...
Primo: I send a message to General Gladus "I think my friend may have walked of with most of an armory..."
OOC too* grammar fail 0.0
OOC to bad I named them before you! BIC
Primo: to gargoth (telepathic): "The Alliance of Seven Terra is seven version of Earth, each from a different dimension, joined to combind their...
Primo: I land and show the soildiers my DCU ID. "I'd didn't know you joined Gargoth. What's your rank?" I telepathically add "[img]" OOC tony, in...
Primo: After I woke up, I flew back to the Academy, after telling General Gladus that I was fine, but have no idea what hit me. I remembered...
Fenrök: I enter the fortress, and I am brought to the base commander. "Captain Gladus?" I ask, recognizing the officer. "General Gladus now." He...
Fenrök: "Well, if they are who Primo and I think they are, our mission will be easy. And, with more explosions." I dissapear into the forest......
Fenrök: "well..... I could try to get in and see if they are who Primo and I think they are. If I'm not back in 30min, push the big red button,...
OOC california (pacific) time zone! it's 13:29 here btw BIC Primo: "Hmm..... this might complicate things. Fenrök has found a stronghold,...
Primo: I follow Gargoth, Shadowspirit (soul-stealing sword) at the ready "Stay alert, the demons can attack from anywhere, at any time. Fenrök: I...
OOC ok tony BIC
i like it
Primo: I morph into my human form, and Fenrök morps into a robot that looks, and feels exactly like a human.
Primo:"Yes, deformation of the groin region. Kidding, probly. I don't really know."
I like it, a good start. I suggest you get an editor for your gramatical errors though.
Primo: I walk back to my dorm, "Fenrök, it's time." He gets up and we both walk to the gate.
clan
Primo:"Yes.", I chuckle softly.