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Post feedback for my story "the darkness below" here please not on the story itself
Im currently working on the next chapter using the feedback I have gotten here I will make a thread for feedback as well so that it doesn't muck...
Cheese I'm not saying you cant give criticism but it should at least be constructive instead of saying it just sucks over and over
I'm canadian and also three chapters means #s the prologue is just the stories intro I haven't done chapter three yet you must wait for chapter 3...
Not when he keeps saying the same thing
My point is cheese is refusing to give me a chance if he doesn't like it he doesnt have to read it
My point is you don't even know anything about the story and your already dismissing it as a failure
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Really so what your saying is insulting my hard work and thought isn't bullying is that it is this a holier than thou thought process you've got...
No your right but an iq of 211 does
You dare insult me with words your puny cerebellums cannot comprehend! Here's a thought you get the **** out of ff! Get the **** out of my story...
Prologue This is the story of six friends and a fight for survival in a post-apocalyptic world. There are many dangers and something lurking in...