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I love the second chapter, and I find the trollostic accent hilarious lol, u have alot of talent feather (>'.')> :-)
I haven't read cheeses version but feathers version was awesome! I love how many elements of kaw u put into the story lol very very creative
I posted a poem in Fanfic but it SUCKS I need tips >.<
(sorry I fail at centering, the poem starts after the )
This is my first poem I have posted in fan fiction, so it's probably not that good but let me kno what u think!: TWO MORE HOURS...
6 1/2
18 million >.<
O.O ok, wow now I wanna keep reading even more lol
Ooo ah I can't wait for the next part, like I said
Dimitri is my fav character, and I would loveee more detail on Italy, yes
My suggestion for the next part would be some type of a fight... Possibly between dimitri and Italy. Idk just thought of it now
I love it feather! The newest installment is now my favorite part! So much feeling, so much passion. I cannot wait for the next installment
WOW with that spoiler in writers cafe feather, I can tell this fanfic is gonna be amazing, keep at it!!
I love the prologue (violets birth). Ur so creative, especially with the names, I wish I had such creativity!
The dark had flowed onto the ever lighted city, scaring the citizens. I held a candle and sat on my bed, reading..... FINISH THE STORY!...
This is an amazing fanfic feather! I love it!